I like the fly on the daisy and the Dandylion head but I think they could do with a little tweak here and there. Here is a copy of you last image with a a slight curves adjustment and a small amount of sharpening. It could probably do with a spot of noise reduction in the background and maybe a small vignette. What do you think?
oh i really like it pete thanks for the tip, the original picture was dark i took it on a fujifilm camera but was in a wooded area on a road where the daisy i was in such a rush to get it as i wanted to mainly get the fly on flower i just adjusted the contrast on it but thanks for the tip on second shot off it looks much better!!