Critique Welcomed Afternoon Stroll

[Brian Moore]

Olympus OM2n with Arista EDU 400 film processed in Rodinal.

This was before I had my OM2n overhauled. I didn't know at the time that the shutter was acting up. At speeds up around a 500th the shutter curtain lagged, causing that dark area on the right of the frame. It's not too bad in this picture but was worse in others. Fixed now.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Man, you bug me. Even your mistakes make good foties

 

[Dave Farnes]

Has a vintage look to it, like a shot from the great depression.

 

[Brian Moore]

Has a vintage look to it, like a shot from the great depression.

That's a good characterization of it Dave. I never thought of that but it fits. Thank you.

 

[Pete Askew]

I see what Dave means and I can see that too. If you hadn't mentioned the shutter defect I'd have assumed it was shot through a car window. I like it.

 

[Brian Moore]

Man, you bug me. Even your mistakes make good foties

lol. Actually I find that mistakes often make the best foties.

 

[Brian Moore]

I see what Dave means and I can see that too. If you hadn't mentioned the shutter defect I'd have assumed it was shot through a car window. I like it.

Thanks Pete. Much appreciated.