Brian Moore
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Superheadz Blue Ribbon toy camera and Kodak Tri-X 400 processed in Rodinal.
Critique Welcomed Bait
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Pete Askew
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And, he's hooked! Love the self-adhesive hat!
Brian Moore
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His hair is velcro, Pete.
Pete Askew
Admin
Must be tricky getting jumpers on and off! 
Pete Askew
Admin
I guess that's why he lives in California. 
Paul Lange
Moderator
Took me a while to spot that two guys have been hooked by the bait. A double catch!
Brian Moore
Moderator
I intended to post this image under the "critique welcomed" heading, but I realize now I didn't. Perhaps that's why no critique?
I snapped this one quickly, without taking time to compose. The resulting composition is unsettling to me. I think it would be better had I captured less stuff on the left and more on the right, thereby placing the subjects left of center with the word BAIT a little more prominent. Thoughts?
I snapped this one quickly, without taking time to compose. The resulting composition is unsettling to me. I think it would be better had I captured less stuff on the left and more on the right, thereby placing the subjects left of center with the word BAIT a little more prominent. Thoughts?
Pete Askew
Admin
I have added the prefix for you Brian (lucky I have moderator rights! ).
I don't find the balance disturbing and I like that the eye falls to the distance and then the main figures. And the fact that you then suddenly click about the title and the word works for me.
).I don't find the balance disturbing and I like that the eye falls to the distance and then the main figures. And the fact that you then suddenly click about the title and the word works for me.
Brian Moore
Moderator
Hey wait,...ain't I a moderator, too?I have added the prefix for you Brian (lucky I have moderator rights!
Thanks for fixing that, Pedro, and thanks for the comments about the picture.
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