Baldboy

[Stevenson Gawen]

Bit of intentional camera (and subject) movement here! Snap of my cousin Albert. The title is the result of a 2 minute brainstorm around the kitchen table where my laptop is sitting right now.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

I like it. There’s a bit of mystery about the subject, which always pulls me in. Who is he? Where is he going? What is he doing? Etc.

 

[Gianluca Drago]

This is very intriguing, shoulders, hands, movements, dynamics, contrast, and all.
BTW, @Stevenson Gawen , you have a very dirty sensor!

I'd like to see this photo with a 4:3 vertical cut and the blue less saturated, but I can't ask you for extraordinary work, can I?

 

[Stevenson Gawen]

There’s a bit of mystery about the subject, which always pulls me in. Who is he? Where is he going? What is he doing? Etc.

Thanks Rob! Glad you're out and about on the forum again too - it's not the same without you!

This i very intriguing, shoulders, hands, movements, dynamics, contrast, and all.

Thanks Gianluca I like that too.

you have a very dirty sensor!

4:3 vertical cut and the blue less saturated, but I can't ask you for extraordinary work, can I?

Why not?
Like this perhaps?

 

[Gianluca Drago]

Like this perhaps?

You are of a rare kindness. I like 4:3 much better, especially when the photo is vertical. But on colours I didn't mean orange and teal, just a less ‘standard’ sky, for lack of another term, more muted.

 

[Stevenson Gawen]

You are of a rare kindness.

But on colours I didn't mean orange and teal, just a less ‘standard’ sky, for lack of another term, more muted.

It did go that way didn't it? Hm......?

 

[Gianluca Drago]

Perfect!

But just a personal opinion, as always. Thank you, Steve.

 

[Gary R. Smith]

You certainly can't complain about the service here...

 

[Gianluca Drago]

You certainly can't complain about the service here...

Definitely!

 

[Stevenson Gawen]

Thanks. I like the final version best too! I definitely can't complain about the 'intelligent artistic feedback service'!

 

[Pete Askew]

And being late I get to see the final vision! I like it a lot too (although I’d probably have gone toned mono!). It is reminiscent of of pre-WWII German cinema. “Das Golem” springs to mind.