Critique Welcomed Balinaların Hikayesi (The Story of the Whales)

[Nihat Iyriboz]

This is the second work in my slideshow with guitar series. The composition is based on the stories my grandfather told me about the whales when I was 4, 5 years old. I remember no details of the stories. However, his love and compassion and great story-telling are still in my memory. He passed away when I was 6 years old. This is in remembrance of his kindness.

Balinalar

 

[Paul Lange]

That was beautiful Nihat.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Seen that one before, Nihat, but nothing wrong with seeing (and hearing!) it twice

 

[Pete Askew]

I agree, that was a lovely combination.

 

[Nihat Iyriboz]

I think, you've seen this before from my short lived days with Facebook, Rob. It's a first for RPF. I know, you'd rather separate seeing and hearing.

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Thank you very much, Paul.

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Thank you very much, Pete. I think this kind of work I plan do do, will get better with newer recording set-up and better resolution choices.

 

[Brian Moore]

With the backstory it is much more interesting,....notwithstanding your fine photography and guitar skills.

Uh,...what I mean is, by just seeing the You Tube vid without the backstory I would have thought, bonnie foties/bonnie musical accompaniment. But knowing why gives it that third dimension into your history and it brings it all together. Marvelous!

 

[Nihat Iyriboz]

Thank you very much for the feed-back, Brian. I thought about adding a few words to Vimeo, YouTube.