Critique Welcomed Be very gentle with me

[Davie Hudson]

bear in mind i don't do people but i was roped into this with little enthusiasm .... is it at least passable ?

 

[Rob MacKillop]

No. Get back to the hills!

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[Davie Hudson]

No. Get back to the hills!

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I honestly don't like people, they have expectations lol

 

[Brian Moore]

The right lower corner is distracting Davie. Too white/bright for my eye. Apart from that, though, its a nice fotie of a young mother and baby making lovely eye contact. It it possible to tone the white down a wee bit?

 

[Lesley Jones]

Ooooh... more than passable I would say, but I do agree with Brian about that right hand corner

 

[Kev Pugh]

Agree with Brian, I've just downloaded and adjusted levels but the lads white shirt is still DAZ WHITE go back and get him to wear a black one

Seriously though Davie I'm sure the couple will love it

 

[Pete Askew]

I'm with the others Davie. Very nice composition and the eye contact between mother and child is spot-on. But the highlights are just too bright I think. Can you bring the whole scene down by a stop?

 

[Davie Hudson]

I'm with the others Davie. Very nice composition and the eye contact between mother and child is spot-on. But the highlights are just too bright I think. Can you bring the whole scene down by a stop?

i'll have a look at what i can do with the exposure levels I have a few more that aren't as high toned as this one