Critique Welcomed Broken Home

[Aldous Lau]

 

[Tom Dunne]

Very good composition again Aldous and as Pete said earlier somewhere, great potential for an interesting series.
Personally I feel this is a little too dark, a little over processed and bordering on melodramatic.

 

[Glenn Clabo]

Well done Aldous. I am going to respectfully disagree with Tom. Maybe it's my dark side showing...but I like what you did with this. It only goes to show that Plato (?) "beauty (art) is in the eye of the beholder" I guess.

 

[Pete Askew]

Another fine addition to the series but I agree with Tom about it being a bit too dark I think and it would be nice to geta bit of separation between the top of the building and the sky. There are also some halos around the hills that draw the eye.

 

[Paul Lange]

I too link it but think it is a little dark. You have strong shadows and the highlights seem a little odd being midtones.

 

[Aldous Lau]

Very good composition again Aldous and as Pete said earlier somewhere, great potential for an interesting series.
Personally I feel this is a little too dark, a little over processed and bordering on melodramatic.

Thank you Tom and appreciate your comments

 

[Aldous Lau]

Well done Aldous. I am going to respectfully disagree with Tom. Maybe it's my dark side showing...but I like what you did with this. It only goes to show that Plato (?) "beauty (art) is in the eye of the beholder" I guess.

Thank you Glenn

 

[Aldous Lau]

Another fine addition to the series but I agree with Tom about it being a bit too dark I think and it would be nice to geta bit of separation between the top of the building and the sky. There are also some halos around the hills that draw the eye.

Thanks for your explaination Pete

 

[Aldous Lau]

I too link it but think it is a little dark. You have strong shadows and the highlights seem a little odd being midtones.

Thanks for your adivse Paul