Dive

[Jim Kuo]

Thanks for looking.

Jim

 

[Pete Askew]

Leaping over the buildings with a single bound just ain't gonna happen I'm afraid. He's got is underpants on under his trousers. Still, apprentice super-heroes have to start somewhere I suppose.

 

[Jim Kuo]

Thanks for the honest critique, I really find it useful. Much appreciated!

 

[Pete Askew]

Sorry Jim, there wasn't much critique in there was there? I think it is a nice bit of observation and interesting because of the odd pose - not so much the street, but the way his head is inclined. I find the bike disturbs the composition a bit but I like the curves on the building and upper right of the building and the way it seems to splay the image out. Have you tried it as a high contrast B&W?

 

[Jim Kuo]

Thanks Pete, I describe critiques as constructive feedback/comments that helps me to think and re-think about my approach, i.e., I see it as very good things and I can not get enough of.

I initially was annoyed by the scooter in the shot, but later I though it looked a bit like the diving board (although his position isn't perfect...).

I am slowly going though the pictures taken on the trip, I will get to different style of pp on posted shots one of these days .