I like it Dan, very 'intimate' - and I"m sure they will too. I find his hair a tiny bit distracting and if I was being picky (as if!!), I'd probably apply a touch of blur to it and soften the highlight. What do you think?
He did say "look how shiny my hair looks" when he saw the photo I must admit, I told him not to stick too much conditioner in his hair then..... But your right about that, it was the first thing he did notice.