Critique Welcomed Foggy Afternoon

[Aldous Lau]

 

[Pete Askew]

Nice and moody Aldous and they almost look stormy. I'd be tempted to lose the foreground in the first and make it more about the fog and the hills. What do you think?

 

[Aldous Lau]

Nice and moody Aldous and they almost look stormy. I'd be tempted to lose the foreground in the first and make it more about the fog and the hills. What do you think?

Thanks for your comment Pete. Let me try to get rid the foreground in the first when I back from business trip