Critique Welcomed Homeless Chap With Pail & Jug Of Milk

[Brian Moore]

On the pier one morning last week.

Olympus OM-2n, Zuiko 50.1.8 and Kodak BW400CN.

 

[Pete Askew]

Nice composition and I love the line of life guard stations. A bit more of his shadow would have ben nice but I guess you'd have fallen over the rail!

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Superb Brian, as Pete I love the angle with the huts going into the distant. You've captured the scene , that morning half awake half asleep look to a tee.

 

[Glenn Clabo]

Nice comp Brian. It tells a story.

 

[Brian Moore]

Nice composition and I love the line of life guard stations. A bit more of his shadow would have ben nice but I guess you'd have fallen over the rail!

Thanks, Pete. I agree about the shadow. To be honest I didn't spend much time composing lest he react in some way. So I raised the camera to me eye, did a fleeting review of the comp, snapped the fotie and moved on as if I'd never saw him. But yeah,...a little more shadow would have been nice. Thanks again, Pete.

 

[Brian Moore]

Superb Brian, as Pete I love the angle with the huts going into the distant. You've captured the scene , that morning half awake half asleep look to a tee.

Thank you, Julian. Much obliged.

 

[Brian Moore]

Nice comp Brian. It tells a story.

Appreciated, Glenn. Thank you.

 

[Paul Lange]

Top stuff Brian, I like it especially the sense of downtrodden-ness about it.

 

[Brian Moore]

Top stuff Brian, I like it especially the sense of downtrodden-ness about it.

Thanks Paul. Much appreciated.