I recall a few years back watching a video on how LightRoom could improve your photos. This guy took what I thought was a very good photo and proceeded to make it worse with every technique he used. The encouraging thing was that every single Comment decried what he had done.
I have made similar mistakes many times in the past, but these days I try to do as little as possible, unless I’m really going for a particular effect.
Looking at these grasses images again, I very much prefer the darker of the two. The eye is drawn to the highlighted clump. In the first version - and I emphasis the subjectivity of this - there is far too much information to take in at once.