Critique Welcomed Law and order

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

as it was before in the streets of Brevik, Norway.

A frightful weapon back then.

This peace constable of law and order also told the inhabitants to put out all lights and go to sleep.

But as always, there were some...











Alas there is order again in town.

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

I can see youve been up to no good again Ivar You crazy lot over their, come to think of it we do similar things here as well
Well scooped and reported here.

 

[Pete Askew]

Apparently there'd been reports of a hoard of stolen gold in the town which instigated a raid. Looks like buying that chap a bottle of wine paid off, Ivar!

Nice series.

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

Apparently there'd been reports of a hoard of stolen gold in the town which instigated a raid. Looks like buying that chap a bottle of wine paid off, Ivar!

Nice series.

Thank you, but only fish and chips were required Pete.