Critique Welcomed Lonely Bot

[Aaron Quinn]

Some times I look at it and I like it, then I look again and say "ehh" in my head. I think it's really just the lighting and the lines I like. The little candy bot kind of helps break up the lines.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

It does look a sad and lonely candybot. LOL. You've succeded in telling a story through a picture. That's photography.

 

[Martin Pancisin]

Very nice, the three different textures (brick, floor, plastic/metal) are very interesting idea. I am puzzled by the light source though...

 

[Aaron Quinn]

Thanks for the feedback. The light is from a can might on the ceiling right above the candy bot.

 

[Pete Askew]

Very nicely framed Aaron and the lighting works very well well too I think. I like it. My only thoughts would be to see if I could distort the image to get the bot parallel to the sides of the frame and maybe create a spot of vignette to tone the highlights down a touch to slow the eye down from reaching it as it were. What do you think?

 

[Beth Carter]

looks like adventure time meets and old 1940s murder mystery film. love the mystery lighting, tones and lines.

 

[Pete Askew]

A title sequence maybe. I see what you mean Beth.