Critique Welcomed Models

[Mauro Tandoi]

Model di Mauro - A Passionate Photographer, su Flickr

 

[Pete Askew]

I like this a lot Mauro. Nice composition and tones. I might be tempted to lose a touch of the foreground though to keep the lines simpler. What do you think?

 

[Mauro Tandoi]

I agree, thks

 

[Beth Carter]

i don't like their blank expressions, just a smile or even a hint of a smile would help. excellent comp., though i agree with @Pete Askew about cropping the bottom.