Critique Welcomed My Kind of Street Shot

[Ronald Atchley]

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[Hamish Gill]

Ron ...
I actually find that a little scary ... I know its not intended that way ...

 

[Ronald Atchley]

Sorry. Not intended that way at all.

 

[Hamish Gill]

... i didnt want you to remove it
I was hoping for some convo on the subject...
sorry buddy

 

[Brian Moore]

Sorry. Not intended that way at all.

Completely understood, Ron.

 

[Lesley Jones]

Come back Ron! I had a quick look before bed last night, but I was too tired to comment. From memory I thought it had good timing, but there was a lot of noise, so maybe a crop. I seem to remember some strong highlights in her hair, which might explain why her eyes looked a tad odd. I think they rather stood out against her skin. It certainly had possibilities. I thought it might be better in colour - what do you think?

 

[Ronald Atchley]

When I saw the pic posted, I realized the crop had been too much and it was too grainey.
Also, I guess for the same reason, I had over done the eyes. Didn't like it so removed it.
Gonna back up and rethink some things.