Critique Welcomed Pipedream (at The Risk Of Repeating Myself)

[Graeme Harvey]

After a play with the original in GIMP

 

[Pete Askew]

Works for me Grez.

 

[Graeme Harvey]

Thanks, Pete. I took your advice, trying to cut down the "white out" and emphasizing the texture of the inside of the slide. I was thinking of converting to black and white, but I liked the blues and yellows in the tube. I'm actually really pleased with the way it came out in the end, so thanks again for the advice and guidance.