Hi Jared,
Can I be honest (rhetorical question), I find the overall image very professional and polished, There is a degree of skill that is obvious. The lighting is very good, the exposure is excellent, the image is nice and sharp. However, I find that the image is a little contrived somehow and in some ways a little corny. I hope you do not see this as a negative comment as I wish that I could nail the lighting as well as you do, I am just wearing my heart on my sleeve so to speak.