Critique Welcomed The Daddy

[Davie Hudson]

not 100% happy with this but here ya go ..... on the Glen Nevis Road heading towards Ben Nevis

 

[Pete Askew]

Love the colours and soft tones but the composition seems a touch out somewhere. How about picking up a diagonal from the white line in the bottom right corner?

 

[Davie Hudson]

Love the colours and soft tones but the composition seems a touch out somewhere. How about picking up a diagonal from the white line in the bottom right corner?

That could be it, I've looked and knew something wasn't right but couldn't see it... that and the sun was getting right on my nerves, still ridiculously cold though, I was at the foot of Ben Nevis after all lol

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Love the colours and soft tones but the composition seems a touch out somewhere. How about picking up a diagonal from the white line in the bottom right corner?

Oh and Pete, i have a square one lol

 

[Glenn Clabo]

The road draws the eye all the way. Nice....but I wish they knew how to spell Glenn.

 

[Davie Hudson]

The road draws the eye all the way. Nice....but I wish they knew how to spell Glenn.

I can imagine that would be annoying

 

[Beth Carter]

love the s-curve in the road that's leading straight to the mountain. looks like you worked your way down the perfect comp. checklist and even added in mountains too.

 

[Nihat Iyriboz]

I like this country! Nice curved road leading up to the mountains passing two mini mounts on the left corresponding with the leading high peaks... Trees start from the left top corner and transfer the line to the ridge going up towards left. About five lines spreading out from the center. Beautiful composition, Davie...

 

[Davie Hudson]

love the s-curve in the road that's leading straight to the mountain. looks like you worked your way down the perfect comp. checklist and even added in mountains too.

I really wish I thought of these things when I took them lol, thank you Beth. I still think there is something missing, I'll have to revisit soon

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I like this country! Nice curved road leading up to the mountains passing two mini mounts on the left corresponding with the leading high peaks... Trees start from the left top corner and transfer the line to the ridge going up towards left. About five lines spreading out from the center. Beautiful composition, Davie...

Thanks Nihat, There are so many roads like this in Scotland i'm building up a bit of a stock of them lol