@Tony Warren, Thank you very much for such a thoughtful and detailed reading.
It’s particularly interesting to hear your take on the composition, especially the balance between the figure on the right and the darker area on the left (I wasn’t consciously applying the rule of thirds), and the way the curve draws the eye in — I have to admit those aspects weren’t deliberate on my part, so it’s great to see them articulated so clearly.
You’re absolutely right about there being quite a lot for the eye to settle on once it comes to rest. Though I see it as a flaw, I take it as a compliment.
And thank you as well for mentioning the colours — they were part of what initially caught my attention.
I really appreciate you taking the time to share such a careful critique.
And the letters... sorry, they are not as readable as I'd liked, I know. They are printed on the desk behind the legs of the human figure.