Critique Welcomed Towards Denmark

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

Made possible by OMD E-M10 and its kit lens 14 - 42 mm ez

 

[Pete Askew]

Lovely colours and composition, Ivar. Nice.

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

Thank you Pete, it's actually a nice little camera.

 

[Milan Vjestica]

You have captured the sky really well Ivar. I would have made more of a feature of the sky and probably cropped out some of the foreground and lighted the rest. Perhaps just a little lightening of the shadows to bring out the detail.

Well composed with the light on one side drawing you into the most dramatic part of the sky. Nice indeed.

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Excellent Ivar.

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

You have captured the sky really well Ivar. I would have made more of a feature of the sky and probably cropped out some of the foreground and lighted the rest. Perhaps just a little lightening of the shadows to bring out the detail.

Well composed with the light on one side drawing you into the most dramatic part of the sky. Nice indeed.

Thank you Milan. There are possibilities in the direction you advice, but the foreground is a part of leading your eye in the direction I find natural and if I crop here I feel it's being wrong. I shall however follow your advice and look into it again. I am always grateful for feedback of this kind Milan. It is truly appreciated. Cheers mate! Oh by the way, there is detail in the foreground Milan, by my monitor here.

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

Excellent Ivar.

Thank you Julian. This is taken on the Swedish side overlooking the straight between the two countries, called "Lille belt" / Little belt in English. Takes about 25 minutes to cross with the ferry.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Really bonnie.

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

I have done a second version, but do I like it?

 

[Rob MacKillop]

I prefer the first, would be happy to claim either of them as my own...

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

I prefer the first, would be happy to claim either of them as my own...

Thank you Rob, much appreciated.

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

I have done a second version, but do I like it?
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Give in ! Do you like it? Looks good too me Ivar as for a ferry trip of twenty five minutes , that puts a lot of perspective on the scale of the landscape and it looks as if it could possible be a rough ride on a blowy day.

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

Give in ! Do you like it? Looks good too me Ivar as for a ferry trip of twenty five minutes , that puts a lot of perspective on the scale of the landscape and it looks as if it could possible be a rough ride on a blowy day.