Critique Welcomed Watching over Bunker Hill...

[Glenn Clabo]

 

[Darren Turner]

i like the idea here alot, cant help think the canon kinda looks chopped off at the bottom of the picture, apart from that quite like it

Daz

 

[Glenn Clabo]

Daz...DUH! Why didn't I notice that? Good point...live and learn I guess. Thank you.

 

[Beth Carter]

nice framing, i like how you have the trees on the side and the cannon at the bottom. the obelisk seems to be the main focus of the image so the cut off cannon doesn't bother me so much. wouldn't mind seeing another version of the comp with more of the cannon in it though.

 

[Glenn Clabo]

Beth...ok... I'll give it another shot.