Afternoon at the river

[Brodie Jackson]

Spent the afternoon at the river. Took a few photos then we couldnt help but go for a dip lol.
This is my mate, Jasmin.

Thanks folks

 

[Pete Askew]

Excellent again Brodie and I like the PP (maybe a touch warmer though). I think there a little bit too much sky in the second one but otherwise I really like the composition. Always nice to have a willing model!!

 

[Chris Dodkin]

Very atmospheric Brodie - lovely lighting

I know what Pete is saying about the sky in #2

I thought it would make a great B&W image as well - what do you think?

 

[Darren Turner]

very nice couple of shots Brodie, lovely looking area, and as Chris says its always great to have a willing model ( that's if she knows about these photos you took lol) the muted tones make the image feel like it was taken many moons ago, i quite like this.

Would love to see the same image with more natural colours to comapre

the sky inst much of an issue to me to be honest.

I do however LOVE Chris's Edit.

Great work guys

Daz

 

[Brodie Jackson]

Cheers guys!
Chris, I love that edit!!!
This is the untouched original..

 

[Bryan Hunt]

A couple of excellent images there Brodie my fav is the 2nd one .I am with Pete in that i would crop the sky a little.

 

[Thomas brookes]

Once again Brodie awesome shots. Love both of them they have a high end fashion shoot feel to them.

 

[Darren Turner]

Even the original is a dam fine Image........!!

 

[Brodie Jackson]

Thanks all
dress made by myfriend, Jasmin

 

[Hamish Gill]

Brodie, that first one is really nice!
Its crying out for a softer contrast and slight toning ... instragram stylee!

 

[Hamish Gill]

since ive already ruined one of adams photos this afternoon i thought id ruin one of yours

although i think it may work better on an original raw shot ... this is sorta what i meant

 

[Brodie Jackson]

Ohhh I love that, Hamish!! Thankyou
I need all the help I can get when it comes to editing
This was the original

 

[Hamish Gill]

It might work better from that as a starting point ... In the one I did I don't like that effect where lost highlights go grey ...
Anyway, it's a nice photo I think I just liked the idea of it looking a little whimsical ... Especially as she is dressed like Alice (in wonderland)

 

[Brodie Jackson]

I might have another go at a different edit and grab your opinion

 

[Hamish Gill]

Go for it!!

 

[Brodie Jackson]

Thoughts?
I like it a lot better then the original edit i did.. still not sure if i's quite right though.

 

[Hamish Gill]

Its getting there int it
Its a hard image ...
Did you shoot it in RAW?

 

[Brodie Jackson]

yeh, I shoot in both

 

[Hamish Gill]

fancy sending me the raw file??? ...
you can upload it here Free File Sharing Made Simple - MediaFire

 

[Brodie Jackson]

Ok.. I think I did it right lol
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