Laurence Cremetti
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Here I am again, still playing with ideas. I'd like your comments, if you would, please.
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Again I'm cautiously asking for critique
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Hamish Gill
Tech Support (and Marketing)
The blue works for the first 2... Somehow seems appropriate!
Not so sure on the frameing of the first though, does it need to be so tall?
Product photography is about the end use of the image and although that could be cropped to square or 6x4 or a4 for a mag, Im not sure looking at the image you hae thought about that ... Prospective clients probably will be thinking about that!
The lock(?) is floating, I'm not sure I get why or how ... I'm not sure if that's good or bad
The torch shot works for me I think apart from the writing at the light end is upside down
Nivea is a miss again for me, the blue works better than the b&w of before, but the material is to visible. Of the background is going to be that visible it needs to be part of the photo... Eg of it was sun cream they might be on sand ...
Hope that helps?
Not so sure on the frameing of the first though, does it need to be so tall?
Product photography is about the end use of the image and although that could be cropped to square or 6x4 or a4 for a mag, Im not sure looking at the image you hae thought about that ... Prospective clients probably will be thinking about that!
The lock(?) is floating, I'm not sure I get why or how ... I'm not sure if that's good or bad
The torch shot works for me I think apart from the writing at the light end is upside down
Nivea is a miss again for me, the blue works better than the b&w of before, but the material is to visible. Of the background is going to be that visible it needs to be part of the photo... Eg of it was sun cream they might be on sand ...
Hope that helps?
Pete Askew
Admin
I think I would pretty much echo Hamish's comments. I think the lock might look better against a more stark (maybe white) background and I still find the framing too tight on the bottles I'm afraid. But I guess you are looking for a style that is a bit different to what you see in magazines and catalogues though.
Laurence Cremetti
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Hello guys. Firstly, thank you for replying, it is appreciated.
In these cases, (not just an excuse, honestly), I'm not looking to create a printed advert. I'm just looking at ideas, lights and mistakes in technical issues.
I'm annoyed that I still took those bottles too tight though! Why did I do that again? I actually don't know. It was one of the things I said I would change!! Must be old age................
Today, (Friday), I'm taking an few hours out to try something else. I'll post the results for yet another critique, if that's ok.
In these cases, (not just an excuse, honestly), I'm not looking to create a printed advert. I'm just looking at ideas, lights and mistakes in technical issues.
I'm annoyed that I still took those bottles too tight though! Why did I do that again? I actually don't know. It was one of the things I said I would change!! Must be old age................
Today, (Friday), I'm taking an few hours out to try something else. I'll post the results for yet another critique, if that's ok.
