Critique Welcomed Apartment on Osage Court

[Brian Moore]

Torrance, California.

Minox35GT and Kodak Tri=x 400 processed in Rodinal.

 

[Pete Askew]

Love the contrast between the trees and the angles of the building. So will this be the next book after the bungalows one?

Are they processing artefacts in the sky above the building? Stand processed?

 

[Brian Moore]

Thanks, Pete. Yes this is the next book.

artefacts in the sky above the building

Are you referring to the slight halo? I took this picture a while back (during my bungalow phase). I tend to stand-develop just about every black and white roll now so probably that was the case with this one, too. Thanks again, Pete.

 

[Chris Dodkin]

The film really compliments the period look of the building @Brian Moore

As @Pete Askew mentioned, I like the contrast between natural and man made

 

[Brian Moore]

The film really compliments the period look of the building @Brian Moore

As @Pete Askew mentioned, I like the contrast between natural and man made

Thanks, Chris. Much appreciated.

 

[Pete Askew]

Thanks, Pete. Yes this is the next book.


Are you referring to the slight halo? I took this picture a while back (during my bungalow phase). I tend to stand-develop just about every black and white roll now so probably that was the case with this one, too. Thanks again, Pete.

The reverse-tone faint 'streaks'.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

No idea what that last comment means. But, moving on...

Very nice, Brian. You can easily imagine these buildings on an architect's drawing. Big squares and rectangles. In one sense it seems very easy to do, but like most things,the more you dig into it, the more subtleties you see.

 

[Beth Carter]

a nice 60s vibe going on here. the processing fits scene's mojo.

 

[Brian Moore]

a nice 60s vibe going on here. the processing fits scene's mojo.

Yeah, that's it, Beth. It's mojo's workin'.

Thanks, Beth!