Critique Welcomed Building 13

[Brian Moore]

Holga 120N and Fuji Acros 100 that I processed in coffee.

 

[Dave Green]

Love no2 - good shapes and clean lines - and a sun flare to boot!

 

[Brian Moore]

Love no2 - good shapes and clean lines - and a sun flare to boot!

Thanks, Dave.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Hmmm.....very interesting, Brian. Great shots, for starters, but some interesting pp going on as well. Spill!

I really like these.

 

[Brian Moore]

Thanks Rob. There's not much spilling to be done I'm afraid. The Caffenol gave me dark foties to begin with. In Lr I adjusted the exposure slider left a wee bit, the contrast slider right a wee bit and blacks slider left a bit. I also adjusted luminance quite a bit to the right.

 

[Nick Lukey]

Great processing the first edges it for me, I find the hot spot mildly troublesome, great building though very space 1999.
Day or night that's the question, I think the latter.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Well, the tweaking definitely works here, Brian.

 

[Brian Moore]

Great processing the first edges it for me, I find the hot spot mildly troublesome, great building though very space 1999.
Day or night that's the question, I think the latter.

Thanks, Nick. Much appreciated. Daylight. Sunny late afternoon.

 

[Brian Moore]

Well, the tweaking definitely works here, Brian.

Thanks, Rob. Appreciated!

 

[Nick Lukey]

The Holga looks pretty damn sharp to me.

 

[Brian Moore]

The Holga looks pretty damn sharp to me.

Not too bad for a plastic lens I suppose. Thanks, Nick.

 

[Paul Lange]

There is something other-wordly about these and the treatment that you have given them just works so well.

 

[Brian Moore]

There is something other-wordly about these and the treatment that you have given them just works so well.

Thank you, Paul. Appreciated!

 

[Pete Askew]

Wonderful Brian. And pushing that luminosity really has added luminosity! Combined with the deep shadows you have created a wonderfully other-worldly feel. Nice.

 

[Brian Moore]

Wonderful Brian. And pushing that luminosity really has added luminosity! Combined with the deep shadows you have created a wonderfully other-worldly feel. Nice.

Thank you, Pete. Much appreciated.

 

[Chris Dodkin]

Love the first shot Brian - looks like a Utopian future structure from a 70s Sci Fi movie

 

[Brian Moore]

Love the first shot Brian - looks like a Utopian future structure from a 70s Sci Fi movie

Thank you, Chris. Appreciated!

 

[Pete Askew]

Utopian, or is it…