Critique Welcomed Candid ports...

[Kev Pugh]

A couple of candid portraits from a recent occasion I attended..

Wanted to capture their thoughtful moments, neither were posed, just watched...


Waiting and meeting friends....

A Candid Portrait 2 by Kev Pugh, on Flickr

Pondering....

A candid Portrait by Kev Pugh, on Flickr

 

[Glen Roberts]

I'm not much of a person to give critique on peoples photographs but on this occasion I have a couple of thoughts.

The first one I like the pose and treatment but I find the dark lines, one just above her head and one to the left of the image, distracting. Also there's what looks to be an out of focus guitar neck (for want of a better description) next to her head, if you can see it?
So personally I would clone them out.

The second one I just find a bit too dark for my taste.

These are of course just my personal views which don't really count for much.