Steve Boykin
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Sunday AM
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love the framing on the second. vsco again?
What a great set Steve and I can imagine these extending into a wonderful series, even a photo book. With that in mind though it might be worth settling on a single VSCO process to give consistency so the subject becomes key. I'm not saying that the current approach isn't working, it is and very well indeed, but if you were to make a book, it would ad coherence. What do you think? I really, really enjoy these images of yours.
...And me! Really like the whole set.
A suggestion, and I really woul like you to take this lightly ...
Something I think has improved my photography is my awareness of shooting level where ever possible. You seem to do this almost naturally as most of your iamges like these have vertical lines where they "should" be vertical (or at least pretty close).
It does seem though that an eye for composition over takes this natural level.
The second shot shows this. The image is nicely composed, but the vertical parallels are converging toward the top of the frame ... Due of course to you having to point the camera upward to get the composition you wanted.
This is the bit I want you take take lightly as I can imagine its not for everyone ... Try concidering the vertical lines in the frame first and as of a greater importance than your initial instinctual ideal of composition.
What I've found is that although the shot can take a little longer to frame you find photos where you thought there might not be a photo. And sometimes the outcome just looks slightly more concidered ...
In the instance of the photo I've highlighted you would have had a lot more car park and a lot less sky if those outside walls had been parallel ... But I bet you it would have made an interesting photo! A better one than this one ...??? Not sure ... I would have liked it more, but of course that doesn't make it better And as I say, this whole way of shooting just might not suit you ...
...And actually comes with a health warning. That Darren Bradley, our fly by night () architectural photographer is to blame for my unhealthy obsession with vertical verticals ... I spend far to much time worrying about it... But, I am a lot more happy with the outcome as I feel like I have out more effort into my shooting. I also use Lightroom to correct it when I am out ... It has become quite issue for me mentally
anyway, as I say, not or everyone, and if you do find your self thinking about it ... Try not to dwell on it. These shots are effortless and I certainly wouldn't want that "look" to be lost!