Critique welcome: angel in aluminium

[Peter Blake]

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[Pete Askew]

I really like the lighting and processing Peter. And of the three poses I prefer the first followed by the third. I would prefer the hand / arm to be lower on the first though as the large, flatter area of aluminium tends to draw the eye too much I think. It works better in the other two but I like the shapes etc of the first pose best an it has a more thoughtful and natural feel to it.

 

[Peter Blake]

do you think the third would have worked better if I had used a 'wind machine', for her hair?

 

[Pete Askew]

Not really. I find the pose a little forced whereas the first has a natural balance to it. Maybe if it was a little more dynamic, maybe moving from one 'pose' to another.

 

[Beth Carter]

does the outfit come with a tin foil helmet?

i quite like these, which is odd considering i'm not usually a fan of portraits. nice lighting and tones.

 

[Grant Young]

I love the concept and the images you produced. A bit dark, but overall very nice captures. I rather like #2, though I think the hair curling around to under her arm is a touch distracting. Job well done to me.

 

[Peter Blake]

does the outfit come with a tin foil helmet?

it could do.....

 

[Chris Dodkin]

#1 for me - very cool look