Critique Welcomed Empenadas Peru Gourmet

[Brian Moore]

Shot this a few weeks ago at "Surf City Nights," the weekly Tuesday evening street fair in Huntington Beach.

Olympus OM-2n, Zuiko 50/1.8 and Kodak Ultramax 400 film.

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Superb was my recaion when I saw this first time Brian. For me it is the interaction , along contents of the Food bar itself.

 

[Brian Moore]

Thank you very much, Julian. It seemed to me that sales were slow that night. I think it is reflected in the lady's face. Thanks again, Julian.

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Love the jar hanging up 'Tips'

 

[Hamish Gill]

That's a great shot! I bet that lad has a lomo camera!

 

[Brian Moore]

Love the jar hanging up 'Tips'

Good observation, Julian. Come to think of it...that tip jar looks full; maybe it wasn't as slow as I thought that night! Thanks again, Julian.

 

[Brian Moore]

That's a great shot! I bet that lad has a lomo camera!

Thank you, Hamish. He sure does look lime a Lomo kind of kid!

 

[Pete Askew]

Very nice Brian, I like the colours and the lighting especially. Shame her right eye is partially obscured though. But, "in every" what?

 

[Brian Moore]

Very nice Brian, I like the colours and the lighting especially. Shame her right eye is partially obscured though. But, "in every" what?

I understand your point about her right eye, Pete, but in a way I kind of like it like that. I'm not suggesting I tried that, just that I'm OK with how it turned out. But thanks Pete!

 

[Pete Askew]

I'm a bit torn about it myself. In some ways it draws ones eye to the bull-whip (or whatever it is) and then you think, "A bull-whip? Really?" and that question becomes dominant. And maybe that transforms the image. But then it distracts from the apparent engagement between the her and the young man. And her blank expression ("Not another Lomo toting, student!")