Critique Welcomed Exhibition Space

[Chris Dodkin]

Stairway at the California Science Center - LA

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Sometimes I think some architects are photographers. They design building to be photographed. By writing that I, have come to a thought, of what the correlation is between architecture and the role of influence photography has had upon, how an architect visualises.

Back to the photo. Love the way the elements of the structure has been used to frame. Superb.

 

[Vic Shaw]

I like this sort of stuff but never manage to get shots like these. My only thought on this would be to crop out the left hand side, the nice lines on the right are enough to hold my interest.

 

[Pete Askew]

Very nice Chris. I think I agree with Vic about the LH side though.

 

[Grant Young]

I enjoy the whole frame, though the lower line does pull you away from the great shadow casted off the hand rail with it not cropped narrower. That said, I really enjoy the fact we are eye-level with a main element of the scene, the lower line.

 

[Paul Lange]

Cropped or uncropped it is very nice Chris.

 

[Nihat Iyriboz]

Chris, this is a very interesting composition. I see a perfectly horizontal top ceiling and middle floor bottom and bottom black wall line. Yet second floor, other black wall lines, and the rest of the lines are working in different manners, including the curved ones on the left top complimenting the ones on the wall. In addition, the sun's shadow play with vertical and diagonal lines add cream to the top. I like it!