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Brilliantly disturbing. Love the curve leading to the face. I'm just mildly distracted by the cut off writing above the shop. I'd probably crop that out during printing.
Thanks, Pete. I think you're right, but I'm loath to remove any more off the top since the image is so heavily laden with foreground. I might play with in PS and clone that writing away.

Thanks again, Pete.

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How's this, Pete?
 
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I don't think increasing the amount of foreground relative the main subject will be detrimental. In many ways that lack of balance is what makes the image work so well to me. Top and a touch off the left to clean that side up. What do you think?

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Was the shop called Quiksilver by the way? The font looks like it might be a copy of that used by Quicksilver Messenger Service on some of their albums sleeves.
 
That was mighty confusing. You must have posted that a fraction of a second before I did my version. I ended up staring at it and thinking, "I'm sure I cropped the left side too.". I even went back and looked again in LR before realising what had happened!

Yes, definitely less distracting I think. What do you reckon?

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That was mighty confusing. You must have posted that a fraction of a second before I did my version. I ended up staring at it and thinking, "I'm sure I cropped the left side too.". I even went back and looked again in LR before realising what had happened!

Yes, definitely less distracting I think. What do you reckon?

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lol.

I actually like your cropped version better. Thanks, Pete.
 
Pete's been knighted, and has his own brew! :D

Love the ominous 'big brother' face coming out of the wall - and the subjects completely unaware of it Brian
 
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