Critique Welcomed Fishball Suicide

[Alessio Brinati]

From last shooting which I participated, this is model Fishball - suicide girl
The portrait is not a type in which I attempt often and model-sharing are the only occasions when I can "practicing"

 

[Dave Green]

I like it - nicely lit! The only thing I'd suggest is a slight crop off the top?

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

I agree with Dave and a very good lighting.

 

[Aldous Lau]

Love the lighting, her dreadlocks and tattoo

 

[Pete Askew]

I agree with the comments, Alesso a fine portrait but some of the top, maybe to just above her hair-line would add to the overall I think.