Critique Welcomed From the Front Line

[Kev Pugh]

Its been a while since I visited the WWI project I started at the beginning of the year, mainly because the exhibition organisers have stalled.....no issues I'm planing on adding some of these revisits to another exhibition in June....
After the hopeful development of some 'realistic' smoke effects I'm now pretty happy with the results so far although I will continue working on refinements but thought I would share a work so far...

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The Project continues..

 

[Pete Askew]

Definitely getting there, Kev. It would be nice to see a bit more dimension to the exploding rounds and maybe make the smoke over the wire a bit more transparent. What do you think?

 

[Kev Pugh]

Definitely getting there, Kev. It would be nice to see a bit more dimension to the exploding rounds and maybe make the smoke over the wire a bit more transparent. What do you think?

Yes Pete, was just looking at that...Thanks for your feedback

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[Pete Askew]

That's better, I think.

 

[Kev Pugh]

That's better, I think.

A more painterly feel maybe?