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[Aldous Lau]

 

[Pete Askew]

I like this very much Aldous, especially the line of light. I'd be tempted to straighten the geometry a tiny bit though.

 

[Aldous Lau]

I like this very much Aldous, especially the line of light. I'd be tempted to straighten the geometry a tiny bit though.

Thanks Pete