Critique Welcomed Ice Cream Anyone?

[Brian Moore]

Joe's Italian Ice and Ice Cream, Anaheim, California.

Shot this from the window of the car while waiting for the traffic light to turn green.

Olympus XA and expired (2006) Fuji 200 film. Had to do a bit of post processing to get it to look like I remembered it.

Question: The white lights on left and right are car headlights. Are they distracting?

 

[Pete Askew]

Not overly. They balance the headlight on the left I think and if you cloned them out I think there might be too much dark space for the subject. And on that, it is a fine subject and I like the slightly blurry figures, A super shot.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Lovely colours, Brian. Really beautiful.

 

[Brian Moore]

Not overly. They balance the headlight on the left I think and if you cloned them out I think there might be too much dark space for the subject. And on that, it is a fine subject and I like the slightly blurry figures, A super shot.

Thanks, Pete. Appreciated!

 

[Brian Moore]

Lovely colours, Brian. Really beautiful.

Much appreciated, Rob. Thank you.

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Not for me Brian they actually show there is life elsewhere. Superb image .

 

[Brian Moore]

Not for me Brian they actually show there is life elsewhere. Superb image .

Thank you Julian.

 

[Tom Dunne]

Almost a full set of traffic light colours there Brian. The car lights do not damage the composition Brian, if anything they add to it.
Whatever processing you got up to has worked a treat on the parlour and I like the light- spread surrounding the building.

 

[Brian Moore]

Almost a full set of traffic light colours there Brian. The car lights do not damage the composition Brian, if anything they add to it.
Whatever processing you got up to has worked a treat on the parlour and I like the light- spread surrounding the building.

Thanks very much, Tom. Appreciated!

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Looking forward to the Prague series, Brian. I've never been there, but I believe it is a very photogenic city. Pete has proven so already.

 

[Brian Moore]

Looking forward to the Prague series, Brian. I've never been there, but I believe it is a very photogenic city. Pete has proven so already.

Damn cameras! Can't decide! But when I do decide I hope to get some good foties and with luck one or two that might get close to Pete's standards. Thanks Rob.