Critique Welcomed Into the woods

[Lauren Hunt]

Hi all,
Did a photoshoot with a friend yesterday in the woods, unfortunately I was having issues with my camera so I have very little choice of what to use once they were on the computer, but here are some that I was happy with. Please feel free to critique, I do believe it is needed

 

[Pete Askew]

A very nice set, Lauren and the first is absolutely gorgeous. I like the second very much as well. I like the framing and composition of the third a lot although I wonder if a mono treatment might not suit the mood better. The last looks like it should be part f a sequence and on its own does not work so well I think.

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

Excellent Lauren. The first is superb and gives off a strong warmth of character. I do agree with Pete about the last image but more for the framing. I dont know if you cropped something out but feel it would have been better more central or to the left, otherwise the stance is good.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Hello Lauren. Nice to see you here. I like the shots - they have a warmth to them, and the model is not over-posing. Nice to not have a stick insect for a model. I'd be tempted to remove the sticking-out hair in the second image, above her left ear, which is a little distracting.

Such a shame you had camera problems.