Critique Welcomed Ionelia

[Alessio Brinati]

someone told me that it could be the cover of a cd;
I'm not a fan of this photo but the others like

Model Ionelia

Sony A7 mk2, Minolta AF 70 210 F4 "Beercan" ad 210mm, f8

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

I think it is a very good one with a feeling, emotional expression, but the nose ring is to me rather disturbing. I think it would be better without it. My feeling!

 

[Alessio Brinati]

is a fashion, now 1 of 2 model has it, but I can try to clone it away

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

I know

is a fashion, now 1 of 2 model has it, but I can try to clone it away

I know it is a fashion Alessio as well as tattoos. Just clone it away and see what you think. The image is very good and very expressive I feel, due to her eyes.

 

[Martin Carlin]

I like it the only thing I would clone is the stray hair over her left eye/right eye as we look. Love the colour and tone of this portrait.

 

[Rense Haveman]

Clone the girl, keep the ring!

No, just kidding! I'd say: it's her portrait, and if this is how she wants us to see her, than it must be this way. And I like the portrait a lot!

 

[John Allen]

I like this. Beautiful girls. I do agree with Martin about the stray hair. It is a bit distracting. There are also a couple of hairs over her mouth that could be touched up.

 

[Pete Askew]

I like this also, Alessio and especially the processing you have applied. I mind neither the ring nor the hairs and like that naturalistic feel the slightly dishevelled hair etc give. The one thing I do find slightly disturbing is the slight tilt to her head that makes the eyes not level and that, in some way, makes it seem as if she is not engaging fully with the camera.

What don't you like about it?