It grows

[Gianluca Drago]

The context: Painted steel beams and a tiny plant with heart-shaped fruits.

 

[Tony Warren]

A striking composition Gianluca. The only comment I would make is that the brown biy rather leads away from the subjst. My eye stays with the plant if I crop a little off the top down th the end of the brown bit. Yhe colours are really good, the gentle contrast between the warm and cool areas id perfect and the textural contrast betwen the plant and the painted steel couldn't be better.

 

[Gianluca Drago]

A striking composition Gianluca. The only comment I would make is that the brown biy rather leads away from the subjst. My eye stays with the plant if I crop a little off the top down th the end of the brown bit. Yhe colours are really good, the gentle contrast between the warm and cool areas id perfect and the textural contrast betwen the plant and the painted steel couldn't be better.

Thank you very much for your kind words, @Tony Warren! I agree that the brown element is a bit distracting, but I didn’t want to crop too tightly, as I wanted to retain enough context and avoid making the photo feel too abstract or difficult to interpret.

 

[Tony Warren]

I think it needs the brown element in fact I am just suggesting a crop down to the top of it. It is a lovely foil to the other muted colours in a very sensitive way.