Critique Welcomed Light of my life

[Mike Webb]

Another one from the weekend but I just can't decide if it's any good at all!



X100 again.

Mike

 

[Julian de'Courcy]

For myself it does not stand up against your other post 'out and about'. Photography,painting acting whatever is about communication as much as anything else. Does this image say or communicate anything to me. No, but it may well to someone else with different life experiences to myself.

 

[Pete Askew]

I like the sky in this and the juxtaposition of the lamp against it. Somehow the composition doesn't quite work though and I think it could do with a touch more 'sparkle'. While scrolling down I though that maybe the foreground was taking away more that adding so I had a little play, I hope you don't mind.

 

[Mike Webb]

I did wonder about cropping that way but then it has no foundations which bothers me. I have already cloned out a load of bricks and concrete. I did wonder about making it much darker but that didn't seem to work either.

Mike

 

[Pete Askew]

Sounds like a return visit is on the cards!