I don't know the lens but I wouldn't have thoughts so. I have an oldish Voigtländer RF and that rattles when you shake it! But that's because the frame counter window is floating around somewhere in the depths of the body (and occasionally jamming the shutter release). My guess is that something similarly non-essential has come adrift in your girlfriends' lens and it's only a matter of time before it gets stuck somewhere it shouldn't.
I don't think it's the aperture control stuff, as the rear part of the lens feels solid. The font part of it seems "floating" a bit though, if I hold down the front element, shaking the lens will make no noise. As mentioned, the lens focuses and takes pictures fine.
From what I've read, this behaviour seems to be expected. But I am trying to assert whether it's universal for this particular model. It would be very helpful if anyone who has this lens can share his/her experience.
Mine rattles too ... It's the floating element!
Lots of lenses have floating elements and rattle ... In fact some lenses that don't also rattle
Without wanting to state the obvious, just don't shake it ... Kit like this is very robust all things considered, but shaking it isn't really overly wise
Don't worry, it's a great lens!
Good to know this is a normal "feature", so we don't need to send it back. My gf now has a 35mm equivalent lens to use on her Nikon D300s. My search for a Canon 35mm lens continues... ;-)