Critique Welcomed No clue about how to street but I know I don't like my first shot at it

[Aaron Quinn]

Please rip it apart -

For me the focus is far too close to the end of the frame and too shallow and the truck is far too much of a distraction. Better focus point with a little more depth & loose the truck and I think it would be "OK"...

**Edit - the more I look at it it's kind of hard to even tell it's momma pushing the baby. Maybe if the truck wasn't there...

 

[Pete Askew]

Well, it's certainly interesting and I think you have just won 'Longest Title on RPF'! The buggy, shorts and the truck do get a bit muddled and that makes the figure rather bulky. I'm not sure what you are tying to convey in the image but it has quite a dark feel to it - is the figure leaving you or under threat. It appears that there might be a story here but there is not quite enough to work it out. What was your plan?

 

[Ivar Dahl-Larsen]

As Pete I wonder, and maybe that's what we were to do?

 

[Aaron Quinn]

It was really just something I saw and went for a shot but it doesn't work. It was just my wife walking away from me as I was catching up on a recent walk we took with the new little one.