not sure the partial colouring adds a lot to this picture...I'd have settledd for #1.
I like the way she seems almost to be floating above the road...Nice shot.
I agree with Adrian on this I'm not a fan of selective DeSat though have used it went asked if I could, If you have to then I would leave your daughter in full and desat the background. and maybe a slight crop from the right to place her to the right of frame. It is a nice freeze shot Garry
She is actually fully off the road. I agree with the partial colour comments. Not my cup of tea either.
It is in fact a bit of a crop with some of the right already removed. I could've removed more.
I like how you caught her full in the air. I might have used a longer shutter speed to get some blur in her legs. This would impart more of a sense of speed I think. I also prefer it all color or b&w.
I photograph a lot of runners and when they are going fast, they spend a lot of time in the air! It's the rapid fire that gets a shot like this. It happend too fast to get it by anything other than chance!