Critique Welcomed Trying to quit?

[Glenn Clabo]

I watched this lady as she headed toward me for a few blocks...and she never lite it.

 

[Pete Askew]

I like the blur from the panning and the treatment you've used. Maybe it's one of those electronic jobs!

 

[Glenn Clabo]

Thank you Pete...never thought of the electronic weedinator.

 

[Rob MacKillop]

I like this a lot, Glenn. The blur around her is perfect, the lines on the floor help the sense of forward movement with purpose. She's lost in thought. Any minute now she will take a cigarette from the packet and try to put it in her mouth...