Which One?

Rob MacKillop

Edinburgh Correspondent
Two similar shots, but which placement in the frame do you prefer. At first I thought the central position, but there's something about the lower-positioned one that attracts me, as if we've stumbled upon it.

Daff 2.jpg



Daff 1.jpg
 
Beautiful light. I prefer the first. The semi-circle at the top is more intrusive in the second image.
 
Thanks, lads. I find it fascinating, and sometimes frustrating, that the placement of a an object within a few millimetres here and there, can radically change the interpretation of an image. That's the art of composition, of course.

In the first, the flower and its raindrops are definitely the only thing to be considered. In the second, the flower's environment enters, and complicates the issue. The eye wanders a little. That can be OK if the new information contributes more to the understanding of the main subject, which, in this case, it could be argued that it does. It's the edge of a flower pot, although that might not be obvious, in which case the abstract curved line brings an element of poetry, motion, and, as Pete suggests, questioning.

I find this sort of dialogue and dynamic within an image fascinating.
 
There is also the matter of dof. This image would be entirely different if the background was completely blurred out, so that the flower is even more isolated.
 
Thanks, lads. I find it fascinating, and sometimes frustrating, that the placement of a an object within a few millimetres here and there, can radically change the interpretation of an image. That's the art of composition, of course.

In the first, the flower and its raindrops are definitely the only thing to be considered. In the second, the flower's environment enters, and complicates the issue. The eye wanders a little. That can be OK if the new information contributes more to the understanding of the main subject, which, in this case, it could be argued that it does. It's the edge of a flower pot, although that might not be obvious, in which case the abstract curved line brings an element of poetry, motion, and, as Pete suggests, questioning.

I find this sort of dialogue and dynamic within an image fascinating.
True Rob, yet the composition is a small part. Change one colour's hue within one small area of an image and it alters all the colours within the image, change a tone in one area or a small part, it changes the whole image. It is why when we revisit an image and change our approach it works when it did not first time. It is why we each have our style as we tend to manipulate each time in our own way.Change our approach and we change our style.
 
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The first is more about the flower I think whereas the other involves the whole frame and starts to ask questions.

Nice shot either way. Delicate. Almost like a painting (Oh no, here we go again! ;) ). :)
It is lovely, but I too have a question about the raindrops. How odd the way they are positioned. Why isn't there raindrops on the upper or even on the lower part of the flower. And how was the flower situated when the rain hit since there isn't any hanging drops here, only resting drops in their conformity. Did you photograph it from straight above Rob?:rolleyes:
 
No. That was my tears - it was so beautiful o_O

Add droplets?! I suppose people do that sort of thing. We get plenty of the stuff falling from the skies. No need to add water. Never heard of such a thing!
 
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