Critique most welcome: family snaps

[Peter Blake]

family snaps with some friends

 

[Dan Cattermole]

Looks like fun!
Did you use a soft box/brollie?

 

[Rob MacKillop]

Perfect exposures. Beautiful.

 

[Chris Dodkin]

Love #1 and #2 especially - lovely timing on both

 

[Peter Blake]

Looks like fun!
Did you use a soft box/brollie?

yes a little soft box in the front and a second flash to the left in back. I was concerned about the overly lit areas on the left arm