Critique Welcomed Gambling again

[Ben Jennings]

Well I finally got round to developing a couple more films after my experiment on Friday and I'm quite happy with some of the results. Here is one of my favourites, no editing has been done yet, just scanned in. The full set can be found at :

First attempt at film dev - a set on Flickr

Shot with Canon A1 with 20mm 2.8 and Canon AV-1 with 50mm 1.8. Jessops PAN 100s film, developed with Ilfosol (5mins @ 20C), ilfostop (10secs @20C), rapid fixer (3mins @ 20C), washed for 11mins (bit of washing up liquid at the end) and dried for 2 hours.

Hope you enjoy and any comments on this or any others in the set would be appreciated.

 

[Hamish Gill]

That's a great shot mate ... really really like it!
The only thing I would do is crop it to 6x4 loosing a smidge of the left hand side!
Those penny machines are a great way to loose a lot of cash very quickly

 

[Pete Askew]

Looking good Ben. You've got some super stuff on those couple of rolls. I like the one you have posted here but agree with Hamish about the crop. I love the second helicopter by the way.