Critique Welcomed Hot Coals Only

[Chris Dodkin]

Southern California in July - cold & grey and damp.

I could do with some hot coals right now...

I want a refund!

X-Pro1 and 35mm Lens

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At least the previous users of our beach fire-pit left us breakfast - roasted cheerios!

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It's grim down south - barrel of laughs on the beach

 

[Brian Moore]

The cheerios must have been their parting salutation; somehow they they knew you were English. Nice colors.

 

[Pete Askew]

Nice series Chris. But why would you want to put hot coals in a polystyrene box?!!

And I'm sure those drums are multiplying!! Are you sure they aren't alien invaders employing a cunning (but essentially rather limiting) disguise!

 

[Mike Webb]

Were the colours too weak in the first one? Hot coals implies colour to me. Also having the river's edge line up with the top of the container - does that work as well as not? Not sure.

Mike

 

[Tim Pindar]

Might work better with the container less central, Chris?