Hi Vic, That 2nd shot is is great and though provoking too. I see what you mean about wanting to keep the background in now. Although, if it's part of the series you could still remove most of it, just leaving a hint and let the other photos is the series make up for what you took out the first one. If it seems like I'm banging on about I'm sorry, it's just that I find what you have done very exciting and I'm just throwing out the ideas of the things I would try if it were me.
I would love to see the other shots if you are prepared to post them.