Critique Welcomed Moonlit night

[Bill Watts]

I am currently on leave in Singapore. My flat has a roof garden, and I just happened to notice this. Unfortunately, I only had my mobile phone with me at the time, but it did a pretty good job, in my opinion.

Camera: Samsung A54 5G
Exposure: 1/10s 5.54mm

 

[Geoff Chaplin]

A remarkably good job!

 

[Gianluca Drago]

As requested, I try to venture a criticism. The photo is interesting for its subject and light, but in my opinion there are too many elements present in the framing that risk distracting from the main subject which I identify with the palace-tower that stands out with its luminous holes against the moonlight. I would give the photo a square crop by eliminating most of the roof garden. Also (I did a test) in this case the black and white adds a huge visual strength to the image.

Just my two cents.

 

[Pete Askew]

The phone did do a good job and the exposure works well. I do see what Gianluca means though and the bottom third of the image are somewhat redundant and distract. A square crop of the upper part might suit the image well should you be so inclined.